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Shooter7620 (talkcontribs)

Hello there! I just wanted to point out that when making descriptions on ship pages, it is important to keep the average reader in mind. I'm referring to this edit on the Deity page in specific, as while the description of it technically has truth to it if you interpret it correctly; most people aren't going to really understand that the description isn't meaning to imply that the Deity is overall better than the Prototype X-1, only that it defeats the X-1 in a one-on-one duel (along with most other super capitals). Also that the trivia section wasn't clear about the one-on-one part as well, which also implied in a way that the Deity is much stronger than it actually is.

TL;DR: This isn't a warning of any kind, I'm just giving a heads-up that you should put a little more consideration into how you describe a ship on its page as it can very easily give the wrong idea if not described in enough detail.

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