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	Hello there! I just wanted to point out that when making descriptions on ship pages, it is important to keep the average reader in mind. I'm referring to [https://robloxgalaxy.wiki/index.php?title=Deity&diff=prev&oldid=98341 this edit] on the [[Deity]] page in specific, as while the description of it technically has truth to it if you interpret it correctly; most people aren't going to really understand that the description isn't meaning to imply that the Deity is overall better than the [[Prototype X-1]], only that it defeats the X-1 in a one-on-one duel (along with most other [[:Category:Super Capital Ship\|super capitals]]). Also that the trivia section wasn't clear about the one-on-one part as well, which also implied in a way that the Deity is much stronger than it actually is.		Hello there! I just wanted to point out that when making descriptions on ship pages, it is important to keep the average reader in mind. I'm referring to [https://robloxgalaxy.wiki/index.php?title=Deity&diff=prev&oldid=98341 this edit] on the [[Deity]] page in specific, as while the description of it technically has truth to it if you interpret it correctly; most people aren't going to really understand that the description isn't meaning to imply that the Deity is overall better than the [[Prototype X-1]], only that it defeats the X-1 in a one-on-one duel (along with most other [[:Category:Super Capital Ship\|super capitals]]). Also that the trivia section wasn't clear about the one-on-one part as well, which also implied in a way that the Deity is much stronger than it actually is.

	TL;DR: This isn't a warning of any kind, I'm just giving a heads-up that you should put a little more consideration into how you describe a ship on ~~it's~~ page as it can very easily give the wrong idea if not described in enough detail.		TL;DR: This isn't a warning of any kind, I'm just giving a heads-up that you should put a little more consideration into how you describe a ship on its page as it can very easily give the wrong idea if not described in enough detail.